Thursday, March 21, 2013

Undertow

Derailed, crestfallen
character; It is
unbelievable (at best)

how I capsized when
fact flooded the banks.
I glared at myself, guilty.





28 comments:

  1. I'm amazed at how much you always say in so few words.

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    1. And that's all my high school English teacher ever wanted.
      xx

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  2. You have the rare ability to write with a depth so profound that the reader himself/herself feels as though they're experiencing those emotions.

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    1. Thank you. My favorite lyricist does the same for me, and to be described in the same vein is truly the highest compliment.

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  3. LuLu, you always bring out emotions in me I thought I had hidden... but haven't...

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    1. I can't be sure if that is a good thing or not.. but I'm glad you can connect in some way.

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  4. fact has a way of doing that oftentimes.

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  5. I feel every word you write. Beautifully precise.

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  6. Wow, just wow. Its not only the emotion this does provoke,to me its a rhythm, a melodie even,an aesthetic contruction,composition.
    Thank you

    Xx

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    1. I started out with a haiku and it went awry.

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    1. A woman once told me that guilt is a Christian thing, though I can't be sure.

      xx

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  8. This is absolutely beautiful, I love the form and structure of your writing. Also, I have nominated you for The Versatile Blogger Award x

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  9. so i wonder how long you stay after the disappointing truth makes itself known.

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    1. sometimes I wonder how I stayed so long

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  10. your words are sullenly gorgeous- i feel your ache.

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    1. thank you.. as I said for Keith above, that is truly the highest compliment.

      xx

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  11. Guilt is a good thing. It's an indication that no matter what led us to do a wrong thing, at least, we still look back and feel for it.

    ✗ℴ ♡

    +To Me It Matters+

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  12. very beautiful <3 thanks so much for your lovely comment, you cheered me up :) following on bloglovin and gfc now. lots of love xoxox

    http://thepersephonecomplex.blogspot.co.uk/

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  13. Amazing.
    xx

    http://twenty27seven.blogspot.com

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