Thursday, March 21, 2013

Undertow

Derailed, crestfallen
character; It is
unbelievable (at best)

how I capsized when
fact flooded the banks.
I glared at myself, guilty.





Crafted by at
It's all boiled down to , ,

27 comments:

  1. RyanMarch 21, 2013 at 12:26 PM

    I'm amazed at how much you always say in so few words.

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    1. LuLuMarch 26, 2013 at 10:52 AM

      And that's all my high school English teacher ever wanted.
      xx

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  2. Optimistic ExistentialistMarch 21, 2013 at 1:32 PM

    You have the rare ability to write with a depth so profound that the reader himself/herself feels as though they're experiencing those emotions.

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    1. LuLuMarch 26, 2013 at 10:53 AM

      Thank you. My favorite lyricist does the same for me, and to be described in the same vein is truly the highest compliment.

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  3. Launna March 21, 2013 at 3:01 PM

    LuLu, you always bring out emotions in me I thought I had hidden... but haven't...

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    1. LuLuMarch 26, 2013 at 10:52 AM

      I can't be sure if that is a good thing or not.. but I'm glad you can connect in some way.

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  4. sMarch 21, 2013 at 5:53 PM

    fact has a way of doing that oftentimes.

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  5. Peridot (G+P)March 21, 2013 at 7:42 PM

    *Hugs*

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  6. SaraMarch 22, 2013 at 1:08 AM

    I feel every word you write. Beautifully precise.

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  7. LoulouMarch 22, 2013 at 1:57 AM

    Wow, just wow. Its not only the emotion this does provoke,to me its a rhythm, a melodie even,an aesthetic contruction,composition.
    Thank you

    Xx

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    1. LuLuMarch 26, 2013 at 11:11 AM

      I started out with a haiku and it went awry.

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  8. S.P.March 23, 2013 at 4:36 AM

    Thank you.
    S

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  9. AVYMarch 23, 2013 at 6:08 PM

    That's why facts are overrated, who needs guilt?

    /Avy

    http://mymotherfuckedmickjagger.blogspot.com

    ♥

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    1. LuLuMarch 26, 2013 at 10:54 AM

      A woman once told me that guilt is a Christian thing, though I can't be sure.

      xx

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  10. MaijaMarch 24, 2013 at 5:24 AM

    This is absolutely beautiful, I love the form and structure of your writing. Also, I have nominated you for The Versatile Blogger Award x

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  11. sweetapplerumMarch 25, 2013 at 8:48 AM

    so i wonder how long you stay after the disappointing truth makes itself known.

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  12. kayla March 26, 2013 at 9:07 AM

    your words are sullenly gorgeous- i feel your ache.

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    1. LuLuMarch 26, 2013 at 11:12 AM

      thank you.. as I said for Keith above, that is truly the highest compliment.

      xx

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  13. The Marcy StopMarch 26, 2013 at 1:44 PM

    Beautiful image and words
    xL

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  14. KellyMarch 27, 2013 at 10:24 AM

    How sad and beautiful!

    xx
    Kelly
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  15. shayla.March 30, 2013 at 10:50 AM

    pretty words/photo :)

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  16. A Reckless DreamerMarch 30, 2013 at 12:21 PM

    Guilt is a good thing. It's an indication that no matter what led us to do a wrong thing, at least, we still look back and feel for it.

    ✗ℴ ♡

    +To Me It Matters+

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  17. AVYMarch 31, 2013 at 1:48 PM

    ♥

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  18. HollyApril 3, 2013 at 6:42 AM

    very beautiful <3 thanks so much for your lovely comment, you cheered me up :) following on bloglovin and gfc now. lots of love xoxox

    http://thepersephonecomplex.blogspot.co.uk/

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  19. sweetapplerumApril 10, 2013 at 9:41 AM

    where you be?

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  20. twentysevenApril 16, 2013 at 11:40 AM

    Amazing.
    xx

    http://twenty27seven.blogspot.com

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