Wednesday, May 28, 2014

Constriction

slowly walking down the hall
faster than a cannonball...

standing forward
rushing upright
freezing cacophony
collimating light

deciding singular
generating forthright
focusing beam
shaping tonight

hushing whispers
loving slight
asking forgiveness

dysphoria despite



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9 comments:

  1. Optimistic ExistentialistMay 28, 2014 at 9:17 AM

    So good to see a post from you LuLu! We've missed your blog. This is beautiful and quite deep. I hope the forgiveness that is sought is found...

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    1. LuLuMay 28, 2014 at 6:41 PM

      thank you, Keith
      this wasn't how i thought the story would evolve, but I was playing with rhymes today
      I kind of like it

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  2. VinatiMay 28, 2014 at 9:43 AM

    That's just beautiful!

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  3. RyanMay 28, 2014 at 10:20 AM

    Words I now know the definitions of: cacophony and collimate.

    Simple and light....nice.

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    1. LuLuMay 28, 2014 at 6:39 PM

      cacophony is one of my absolute favorite words to say out loud
      say it with me :)

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  4. MaijaMay 28, 2014 at 12:36 PM

    Lovely, I missed you too x

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  5. kayla May 28, 2014 at 3:14 PM

    dysphoria... i feel restless too. this is pretty, lulu.

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  6. Launna May 28, 2014 at 5:24 PM

    Awe LuLu... I feel you completely... :-(

    I missed you ... I enjoy your posts, they are so honest and true...

    I hope for the forgiveness one day too... ....

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  7. Emma JaneJune 1, 2014 at 2:23 PM

    This is so delicate and wonderful. So good to see your words, darling.

    Em
    Tightrope to the Sun

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