Those eyes, dramatically painted in the color of royalty with lashes for days,
a pale shoulder slipping through an oversized neckline -
a pale shoulder slipping through an oversized neckline -
She will pull you in
and lift you up
up
p
u
and the world falls away
because you are the only person that matters
because you are the only person that matters
Mon amour...
You might become addicted to that rolling high
of everything she embodies
for you -
a challenge and a novelty, adventure and good fortune-
undeniably there is no one like her in the world -
yet suspicious
of all who came before and after
of everything she embodies
for you -
a challenge and a novelty, adventure and good fortune-
undeniably there is no one like her in the world -
yet suspicious
of all who came before and after
presently
you may find yourself
passionately compelled
you may find yourself
passionately compelled
to snatch her down and smash her up
claiming a piece for yourself
before she gets to thinking
she's got it all
with
or
without
you
before she gets to thinking
she's got it all
with
or
without
you
I'm still hanging on your every word.=]
ReplyDeleteThis feels true, don't they always try to claim a piece for themselves? What was once so amazingly unique they begin to try to fight its individuality?
Perhaps the most incredible parts they fall in love with are the most difficult parts they no longer want to strain against in the end.
Deleteso easily addicted, but i do think it's the challenge they become hooked on... it's enlivening.
ReplyDeleteAnd so it becomes your fault when they no longer want you to be who you are... Addiction or not.
DeleteEvery line is striking. Too good for words. ♡
ReplyDeleteThanks, Irene. :)
DeleteThat's good writing, Lulu.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ryan. I can always count on you to come around and say so.. :)
DeleteLuLu, you never fail to deliver... you always make me think and ponder all you words...;-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Launna!
DeleteGod, I could live in this poem. Beauty beyond words. You write with such grace and clarity.
ReplyDeleteEm
Tightrope to the Sun
You are most certainly too kind.. thank you thank you.
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She will pull you in
ReplyDeleteand lift you up
up
p
u
and the world falls away
because you are the only person that matters
I love this absolutely beautiful
missed you
ER xxx
Many thanks, ER. I hope you are doing well in your neck of the woods.
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Sweet holy fuck this was awesome.
ReplyDeleteWHO OR WHAT OMG POETRY YOU ARE DELICIOUS AND CONCRETE AND EPHEMERAL ALL AT THE SAME BLOODY TIME
*Fangirls and passes out*
Peri, you made me laugh out loud a bit. :) Thanks for that!!
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